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Review:Onora says:
Hiya ;)
Back to review now I've got some free time, which is a rare occurence. :P
I liked the idea for this story. Lacey being under in the imperius curse was good, and you showed her emotions beautifully.
Overall I liked it- but I think at times it was slightly confusing. You could work on it being clearer and easier to understand.
Loved the 'Thanks so much for saving our asses' from Sirius. Hilarious, and so in character.
Good job hon. Keep writing, so I can keep reading! :D

Author's Response: Ooh, good! I'm always glad to hear from you!
When I thought of cages (from the banner), the Imperius Curse was the first thing I thought of.
I was trying some different stuff with the story, and I don't think I got it across quite the way I wanted to- like you said :\
Hahaha. I just love Sirius. I had to throw him in.
Heck yes I will! :)


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