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Review:Bella_Portia says:
Interesting title. Liked the analogy to Harry’s blood connection/protection.
I was tempted to suggest that Draco needed a transitional scene, to bridge the gap between his nightmare and his turning up at the Manor.
Aside from that, I liked the first scene a lot. Only thing: I thought the guys would occasionally say things (Draco’s initial “are you crying”, which seemed strange only because his initial reaction to mom would supercede everything else; Snape talking a bit too much after he says they need to go to Andromeda’s, line about the Muggle Priest) – I kept thinking, it’s just the two guys in mourning, and they should be too upset to say anything that doesn’t need saying. Some of the things can - logically – wait till they get to Andromeda’s.

Line about DL not being man enough to father a child – it was just kind of an odd an complicated thought. I’ll elaborate in a PM.

Didn’t quite get the purpose of the Patronus. (And, although I know it had currency in fanfic that Snape’s Patronus was a spider, I never understood why anyone but an obsessed arachologist would have a spider for a Patronus. I like the doe a lot more.)

At Andromeda’s: good scene.
I don’t understand why they would be throwing the book around.
The “not another mess like my estrangement” – where did that come from? And Snape’s response seemed odd.
I thought the reference to Inferi was very clever, and so was the proposed remedy of having Narcissa buried in a Muggle grave.

Author's Response: Ok Cissa is not in the good booksmy partner has cut all communication1b x

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