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Review:cuteybearkel says:
RON IS A J-E-R-K!!! I mean, I know that he doesn't know about Hannah but for God's sake he signed the letter "I will always love you." Yeah, I'll always love you even though I'm dating this other woman, sorry about that little detail. I meant to mention it, really. I've already read the end and won't ruin it for everyone else but I just had to rant about Ron being such a jerk!

Even though I am an H/HR fan, I still love this story, it is so well thought out and deep. I love the part where Hermione was trying to sort everything out and convince herself that she couldn't have the baby, but there was that one pro "Because I want it." That is so amazing and I would never have thought to put that in if I was writing this story. You captured Hermione's character perfectly, treating a pregnancy like she was studying for exams. I'm pretty sure that she's the type of person who can only learn from books and can't really think for herself (she "sounds like she swallowed the textbook" - COS). I mean, she's not stupid, but there aren't really many books that explain what to do when you are having a secret baby that your boyfriend doesn't know about.

I thought her parents were going to be mad at her, but I like it better the way you put it. I didn't want the Grangers to have a fight, because that would just be out of character. I might have been cool for it to be more dramatic, but again, I prefer that they stay a happy family instead of hating each other.

Sorry about this being so long but I'm feeling very talkative today and I L-O-V-E your story! 10/10

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