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Review:ASmilingGrim says:
Interesting premise. I don't think I've seen Regulus portrayed this way - not that I read many from his pov as opposed to Sirius.

I'm curious about some of the changes you've made and I'm wondering how they effect the story (like Sirius and Regulus being twins).

Great cliffy ending. I do wonder what is going on with Rhianna. Actually, I'm curious about what's going on with Lynn, too, that her uncles would treat her as they do.

I enjoyed the description at the beginning of the chapter. It was well done and it gave me a sense that you could really see the common room in your head as you described it. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you! You'll find out most of the stuff in chapter 4. I thought that Regulus and Sirius would be good as twins, because it gives me more of a relationship to play with.
Once I've finished writing this one, and have posted all of it, there are about another three parts, though there may be more by the time I get there. I've already started writing the next one.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I'm sorry if I've bored you now by waffling on at you! Thank you!

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