Good last line, Very Dumbledore... So, did she know Dumbledore, wait was she a student in Hogwarts? she had to be, age wise I mean. This chapter was good, brough out all the greaving that needed to be seen, but it was a bit short.
Colm is such an a-hole. He's a brat, funny enough I think he'll end up helping the rebellion, he just happens to be a pompous little spoiled brat. He can grow out of that, with a few well laid hexes...lol...
I miss Stanley and Langley, are they going to show up again? I hope so...
Once again your story is great, like I said before I can almost forget this is H.P. FanFic im reading, a fow word chages, and this an orginial work of fiction... if it was published I would buy it, and recommend it to everyone I know, annoy them into buying it...I'm like that...
Keep on working, looking forward to the next chapter
Yours Truly, A FAN;
Author's Response: That's a good thought, about Stainthorpe and Dumbledore. I'd keep that in mind. ^^
Yeah, I noticed it was short. The first draft was nearly under my minimum word limit, but I added a bit to make it a little bit longer. Unfortunately, it's still shorter than usual.
Well, Stanley and Langley have left school. They're out fighting in the war, so they don't stop by Alsemore very often. They haven't completely dropped off the face of the earth though, so they might show up.
Ooh wow, thanks so much! I'm always thinking about changing the story a bit and trying to get it published, but for right now, I think I may focus on finishing it in fanfic format, since I can't even begin to think how much would be changed to make it not illegal. Haha.
Thanks so much for the review!