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Review:Onora says:
I can't believe no one has reviewed this, yet you have 4 faves. Weird, isn't it?
Whenever I read a fic, I always try to review it; I know how much reviews mean to authors. So here ya go:
- Using DH canon again! (Hugo, Rose, and Scorpius). Good work.
- I acually liked how this wasn't a Dramione. If they had snogged or something, I don't think it would have felt right. I think it would have spoilt the meaning of the story; to show that wizards have the same problems that muggles do; the kind of same desperate hope that everything would be okay. This had a kind of air of helplessness about it, and I loved it.
- Both also in character. I loved how Draco kind of mumbled his words, as though he was embarassed he was saying them. Is that what you were going for? I also liked how he checked that no one was around. Again, the embarassed thing.
- I think that's it. Sorry, this review is quite long. XD

Author's Response: Agh! I'm so glad that you did, though. I was really interested to see how people would react to this one.

-Haha, thanks. There won't be much of it in my novel-length stories after this.
-I know. It was originally supposed to be, but then I was like, ", this isn't a romance piece."
-Thank you so much! That's something that I really strive for.
-Oh, but I love long reviews! :)

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