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Review:kiwigirl says:
Hmm. That was an ok chapter. Some minor edits-
1. You wrote N.E.W.T.S, but really it should be N.E.W.T.'s, yet in this context it shouldn't be plural.
2. Also, Dumbledore doesn't say "don't ask." That is what a teenager would say, or even some adults, but definetly not Dumbledore (spelt wrong, but whatever.)
Why was Cho crying? was it because she wishes HArry loved her? I didn't really get that part. It was a little bit strange.
Not your best chapter, but still ok.
kiwigirl

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