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Review:Joanne K says:
This chapter is extremely well written. Your grasp and use of the English language is outstanding. You characterisation of Regulus is perfect. We know so little about Regulus through canon, yet your portrayal of him in this chapter makes me feel as though I know him quite well already. You have definitely drawn me in to Regulus's world.

The only criticism I have is in regards to your use of the phrase 'The Noble and Most Ancient House of Black'. I felt that your use of this phrase was overdone. It became repetitive to the point of tediousness.

Other than that one criticism, I quite enjoyed this chapter, you certainly have a gift for writing. I look forward to reading the remaining chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like my portrayal of Regulus so far! I have to warn you it's an old story and there will be a fair few things different from current canon, but hopefully you'll still like it. The repetition of "The Noble and Most Ancient House of Black" was there for a reason, but I'm beginning to wonder if the reason is really worth leaving it in there, or if I should get rid of it because the reasons might only be important to me and annoying to readers, lol. So thanks for your input! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

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