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Review:Onora says:
Very good. This is an interesting concept and I'm intrigued as to where you are going to take it. The Black family as a whole are captivating, and it's great you are exploring some other family members that we know nothing about. :)
The emotion was great, to me it did feel like they were in love. I think you need to work on your description though. Maybe read some other fanfics and stories, to try and broaden your skills. Or something. Other than that, well done. :P
If you need any help with betaing (if that's even a word?!) let me know. I would be happy to help. xD

Author's Response: Wow, thanks. Their love was something I really wanted to get across, so I'm glad that you did get the depth of it.

Thanks for the advice, too. Description has always been a weakness of mine, I really should commit to improving it!

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