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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Yay for fluff! This is like the first happy story I've read in ages, and it's such a cute story. James and Lily are still the ultimate cute couple. You portray them perfectly here, with James kidding around and Lily as almost, but not quite, yielding to his charms. The feeling of potential throughout this was wonderful - it's like the prologue to their romance, the "just before it happened" part.

The descriptions, both of setting and the characters, was excellent, so vivid in nature. I loved the scene at the beginning with the setting sun, but the ending line was beautiful as well. The whole story is amazing, I can't think of another way to say it. Definitely another for my favourites. ^_^

Author's Response: I'm quite speechless over here, but I agree: yay for fluff! =p It is indeed the prologue to their romance - I found it much easier to write than the actual story. I'm very glad to hear that they're well portrayed; I found them to be out of my league, to tell the truth. As for the descriptions; darn, I'm blushing :* But thank you, thank you. You've made my day - or month even ^^,

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