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Review:Water_Fay says:
i really liked it BUT...

i have no idea what they were saying in the pig latin part WHAT-SO-EVER! and that rly bugged me. Also I'm a little confused... what year is James in? Cause I thought he was in 6th, but if Scorpious is in 5th, that puts him in 7th... doesn't it? EEEP! I'M CONFUSED HELP!!! lol.

I love how J.D. wants to "smash Malfoys face in" because of his little sister kate lol. It's really how brothers act lol. I also love the language and slang they use like "frick" and stuff... it lets the story be brought to life even more!

Author's Response: Ooh, I knew that the Pig Latin would be nearly as controversial as frick. But, I love Pig Latin and I can't write what I think people will like best. Gotta be true to yo'self, dawg. Respeck.

James is in 6th year, and Albus is one year younger than him. Rose is also a 5th year, as is Scorpius. Those are the age relations in canon, and I apologize if I didn't make this clear in my fic.

I've always wanted a big brother to be annoyingly protective! So I write lots of stories with big brothers. And thank you for your review!

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