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Review:Water_Fay says:
i really liked it BUT...

i have no idea what they were saying in the pig latin part WHAT-SO-EVER! and that rly bugged me. Also I'm a little confused... what year is James in? Cause I thought he was in 6th, but if Scorpious is in 5th, that puts him in 7th... doesn't it? EEEP! I'M CONFUSED HELP!!! lol.

I love how J.D. wants to "smash Malfoys face in" because of his little sister kate lol. It's really how brothers act lol. I also love the language and slang they use like "frick" and stuff... it lets the story be brought to life even more!
LOVE THE STORY! YOU ROCK ON ROCKS!


Author's Response: Ooh, I knew that the Pig Latin would be nearly as controversial as frick. But, I love Pig Latin and I can't write what I think people will like best. Gotta be true to yo'self, dawg. Respeck.

James is in 6th year, and Albus is one year younger than him. Rose is also a 5th year, as is Scorpius. Those are the age relations in canon, and I apologize if I didn't make this clear in my fic.

I've always wanted a big brother to be annoyingly protective! So I write lots of stories with big brothers. And thank you for your review!


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