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Review:myriad says:
uh-ohhh Lily's going toget jealous. This should get interesting.

This was another excellent chapter. I just want to warn you about the whole 'living together' Cliche...You know they move in together, lily falls in love and two weeks later their shagging on the sofa. Make it different somehow please! Though is James has a girlfriend I can see already that it will be in a way.

I like how James cursed the slytherins for Lily. It was sweet. I also like how you introduced James' girlfriend at the end. very sneaky.

Keep up the good work. 10/10

Author's Response: Lol, glad you like it! Yeah, the living together thing is very cliche, but I think a lot of funny/awkward scenes can develop from that. How 'bout this: They will have seperate living accomodations but they will be seperate from each other, too? Hey, that's not a bad idea.....Lily just thinks they live together.....*looks thoughtful* Mwahaha, thank you!

~Hermionesclass

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