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Review:shadowkitty22 says:
So just a few inconsistencies between your story and the books as well as your story itself. First off, the act of losing part of one's body while apparating is called "splinching" not "splintering". Secondly, in the last chapter you mentioned that Fred's eyes were blue, but now they are brown.

I enjoyed this chapter. It interesting to find out who has survived and who has died. I hope that you will go into further detail on how Harry and Ron died, since Harry apparently didn't die in the final battle if he was writing a letter to Hermione a year after she had disappeared, which was apparently a year after the battle. But I'm sure I will learn the answer to that question by continuing on with my reading. So away i go.

Emilie
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Author's Response: Oh dear, thank you for pointing that out, i'm such an dolt, i should have checked first but my first thought that it was splintering, i knew something sounded wrong. Blue-brown. Gosh, i've done that before, and i honestly get things so messed up. before i put the story up i had written a few chapters and started noticing that alas i had given him different coloured eyes in parts. i thought i fixed that. Sorry bout that. I will be going further in detail- eventually anyhow. keep reading. thank you so much for your review! it's been amazingly helpful. cheers.

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