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Review:ravenclaw_girl308 says:
this is so sweet. it made me smile. I love the way you put the fact Ron wanted more than just a fake teenage relationship, that he wanted a real adult one.

one thing I noticed though, the line: "running her fingers over Ron's hip in a circular motion, which was exposed through his old small pyjama top." you should put the part about his old pj's after hip instead of motion, it would make more sense that way because it sounds like the motion was exposed though his pj's not his hip. I had to read this line twice because it was a bit confusing.

other than that small thing I love it, 10/10

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