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Review:older harry potter fan says:
Very well done--brought tears to my eyes. This was a realistic interpretation of what Remus' and Tonks' last few moments might have been like. The way Remus comforted and encouraged Tonks and then sacrificed himself to protect her was so heartbreaking.

Remus has always been one of my favorite characters from the books and I too was so disappointed that JKR chose to kill him. I know some people were happy Remus died so he would finally be with the Marauders again and be free from his "furry little problem". I just hated to see Remus die when he had finally accepted himself and given himself permission to love and be loved by Tonks and Teddy.

One of my favorite lines was, "I swear I can see James grinning at me, Lily smiling kindly from his embrace, as she always had, Sirius reaching out a hand and winking at me, even Albus standing behind them with that knowing little smile of his and mirth in his blue eyes." Very poignant and well written! Great job!


Author's Response: Oh, wow...
Thank you so much for this wonderful review!
I actually started from that scene in the corridor with Remus and Tonks and Remus' sacrifice (I simply found it fitting for demonstrating his love since he was kinda... cold during DH) and than expanded the story around it so I have to say it has to be my favorite part of it... And yeah. I simply had to correct the injustice JKR made by not giving us insight in their deaths. I adore Remus and I seriously regret him dead. He should have stayed alive and happy with his family, no matter what anyone thinks.
I'm so glad you liked the story so much. Thanks again for your beautiful words!!
*hugs you* ^_^


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