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Review:hjg hjp rw says:
This is a good chapter, even if it is a bit "odd" like you say.

Maybe, instead of just having one POV in your chapter, you could have both? By POV, I mean, one from each 'universe', for lack of a better word?

This is a really good story so far.

Author's Response: Thanks.

I would do that, except that this story is confusing enough (even to me) with the POVs changed just every chapter.

Thank you.

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