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Review:norapotter says:
Wow! You have such a fantastic style. I really love how smoothly this went. From her walking towards the prison to her demtia. You really did that smoothly. And that worked perfectly I really loved this.

And the descriptions. I had such a clear image in my head and you even gave the reader emotions just from the images you gave. Much like how the lighting in a movie sets the mood, or trees rattling or waving changes the feeling you leave the reader with. Great work.

I loved this opening paragraph, "The drizzling rain had seeped into her bones. Even her long woolen cloak could not keep the bitter wind from surging through. Not that the weather mattered. She was dying and a little cold wouldn’t make much of a difference with that diagnosis."

It made me feel cold and wet and bitter, just like your character. This made it easier to sympithize with her.

And her insanity from Askaban. That worked well. I love how here subconcious thoughts are revealed. To show us that she still knew, somewhere deep in there that she was sacrificing her self for the love of a child. That is beautiful.

This was really fantastic and even from this short glimpse I can tell that you are a brilliant writer. At the next possible moment where there is even a short break in my schedule I am going to read more of your work. But I already know that I am going to love it and I can't wait for that break. What a lovely break it will be.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

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