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Review:Cedrics_gurl says:
Okay, here's my process, I will comment on the following things:

-Summary (did it drag me in)
-Beginning
-Introduction of Characters
-OOC?
-Middle/Plot
-Ending
-Praise for individual parts
-Criticism (Constructive)
-Rating and overall opinion!
Ech! Screw the precedure! I can't stop crying!

You went so deep into his character, you made me feel as though I could see inside him, not watching him from afar, I felt as though I was being told about every part of him, every shred of hope he had, every fear he had felt.

The way you made out the character, the way you made his seem as though he was stuck in this gaping chasm of insecurity.

And the paragraphs about the snake and the apple, I would never even have thought of that! You managed to fit in so many metaphors and similies...so many raw emotions! And you gave so much description, without going overboard!

The whole story consisted of emotions and thought, not actions and things like that, they were involved, but the chapter did not revolve around them!

I am practically your worshipper! I admire you so much! I wish I could write like this, sorry for sounding so weird, but this was just amazing!

A definite favourite!

10/10!

Author's Response: *eyes wide* OMG I made you screw procedure. *dies* Thanks for taking the time Cedrics to check this out. That means a lot to me. *hands over a tissue* No crying. I'm glad that you found the one-shot to be a good portrayal of Snape. I'm just flabbergasted by your review. I'm just really glad that you enjoyed it and that I played off emotions and things that you never thought of. I try, my hardest, to make each one of my stories unique. So I'm glad I pulled it off. You didn't sound weird. Thank you for your very kind words and review. I truly do appreciate it, Cedrics. *hugs*

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