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Review:Diandra says:
Ah, Ash, this was brilliant. It was well worth the wait, I really really love it. Honestly, bringing back our (my) Snapeypoo was one of the best things you could've done. Also, destroying Ginny/Harry was beyond wonderful. And that she comes back to Severus for help!? Perfect. But the best were the final two paragraphs. Comparing Ginny to Lily in such a way that completely puts us in his perspective made me feel all squishy and giggly inside. Especially the part about Lily wanting Severus, but choosing *ew* James. What a stupid Lily.

“I have a history of corrupting Potter wives,” This line makes me think a couple of things. First of all, I love you. Very, very much. Second of all, you are the most genius person ever. Finally, you are hilarious and wonderful. I laughed out loud when I read this. Same with the rest of the story; you made him sarcastic and witty, just as he should be. But, of course, you also made me cry. Ash, this was brilliant. Fantastic job.

Di

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Love that "destroying Ginny/Harry" made you so happy, haha. I thought you might like the end where he compared the two. How could I write a Severus/ANYONE without mentioning beloved Lily?? :)

I absolutely love that line too..about his history. I don't know if you noticed (probably not) but this Severus is actually the same Severus from Imprudence. so it's a pseudo-sequel but not really, you know? I've pretty much accepted Imprudence as my own personal canon, and therefore every story written after that is the same Severus. So, LTMF Severus is Imprudence Severus, as is this. Is that weird? lol.

I heart you, and I'm so happy to finally post this so you could read it!! :)


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