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Review:Zacharias_Smith says:
I think the way that Neville thought about Snape here was a little too toned down. Remember that Snape was actually what Neville's Boggart changed into. He must be utterly terrified of him!

You mention that Neville was three when his parents were tortured..I'm not sure that this is strictly non canon compliant, but I always thought that it was quite soon after the Potters were killed, which would make Neville only one. I am not a hundred per cent sure about this though.

I thought the details about Healers were interesting - the way you did the list of what happens to them. You put a lot of detail in and though I wasn't sure about it at first, as it seemed a bit too much detail, I actually think that was what made this story. It was filled with little bits and bobs that filled it out and made it come to life. Neville was absolutely perfectly written and his gran as well. Overall I found it so sad and melancholy and touching. It was great. :) 8/10

Author's Response: Thanks very much for your review! I thought of extending Neville's terror of Snape, but it tended to deviate from the overall point so I ended up leaving it out. As for the whole uncannon-ness of Neville's age.. lol. Creative license ;) It never says exactly when it happened and the lexicon has only guessed. Unlike everyone else, I've always pictured it as being when he's around three. Thanks VERY much for reviewing!

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