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Review:delta says:
Interesting. I'm rather ambivalent about this just because of the fact that I don't really like Sirius/Lily (especially now that unrequited Snape/Lily is such a tastier option :P). However, I do like the plot and the situation that you've put them in. Personally, I find it rather contradictory to Lily's character that she would do something like this (which is part of the reason I can't understand Sirius/Lily), but I love how you twist Sirius's situation so that he starts the story feeling sorry for himself because he can never have Lily and ends the story sorry to others because he wallowed in self-pity while James and Lily died. I truly didn't see that coming and I think it's a very fitting ending to this story.

So, all in all, despite my lack of enthusiasm for the ship, you probably came as close as it's going to get to get me to love reading a Sirius/Lily. This truly was a beautiful work and I'm glad I read it. :)

Author's Response: Haha! I agree with you about the ship, delta. It's so .... sunk, it's not funny, but it's still interesting to write. The undertones of betrayal, especially with Sirius involved, is an intriguing facet of the ship to explore. It's great that the story sort of "convinced" you, at least in the frame of the story itself. It's sort of funny though, since with this story, I am sinking the ship - literally killing it just as Lily got killed at the end. So it is a fitting ending, like you said. :P

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review this. It's always a pleasure to read your reviews, delta. ^_^


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