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Review:njhill22 says:
I think you might need to get a beta-reader, I found quite a lot of grammatical errors. They were all missing words, commas and question marks. Also, while I'm all for Ron being jealous of Harry, I think it was a bit over done here and came across as whiney. On the upside though, the ending was nice. Since the majority of the fic was dialogue it was a nice change to be able to get a visual.

Author's Response: Oh yes my spelling and punctuation keeps getting worse and worse. Maybe that's why I failed English I. Haha. Anyways, I know this story is a little whiney, but it's my story and anything can happen in my story, not trying to sound rude or anything. I'm glad that you liked the ending. I'm very good at creating dialogue, just not punctuating it. Haha. Thank you for the review =]

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