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Review:Andromedatonks says:
Oh, this is very beautiful! I love the atmosphere you created in the beginning: all these parties, engagements; and how Regulus seems slightly estranged from all of this. I also loved the structure and pace of the whole story; you didn't linger too long on anything, but you didn't rush things either. I loved all the dialogues, especially the scene with Sirius. I also found one thing absolutely brilliant: the fact that Regulus had his hands manicured! I'm so glad you actually preserved his aristocratic nature, unlike so many authors who tend to forget what sort of family he and his brother come from.

I'm sorry to point out two things that sort of bothered me: first of all, you misspelled Grimmauld Place several times, and the second I'm not quite sure of, but I've always believed that it is "he raised his head/eyebrows/etc", not "rose" (at least, my dictionary says "to raise is 'to bring something up'; to rise is 'to get up'"). I don't know, but it caught my eye repeatedly while reading.

But other than that your story is simply awesome, and I really enjoyed reading it.

~andromeda

Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much!! I really enjoyed writing this fic, I was bored on Easter day after too much chocolate (I hate chocolate), so I just got a lovely plot bunny and decided to sit down and write this.

Another thank you I'd like to extend is for picking out those errors. I never realised, which is quite embarrassing, and you're right, its not "rose", so I'll go and change it to "raised". And about the spelling!! Whoops!! I didn't notice. Thanks so much for pointing this all out and I'll go back and change it.

Thanks loads, andromeda. It means a lot.

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