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Review:Labby says:
I thought for what you wrote, everything sounded good and the flow worked out pretty well. I just thought that it lacked a little bit of detail and depth. You could add a little bit more into the paragraphs.

I don't think I was quite convinced that Harry forgave them right after that kiss. I know the conversation helped too, but it just seemed to happen quite quickly.

Also, I don't think Ron would be saying y'all. That just didn't fit at all.

Besides that I thought it was cute!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for reviewing my story =] I was beginning to think that it sucked with how little the reviews were coming. Well there really weren't any but yeah =] This was a challenge and I had to do it in under 1500 words so I had to shorten it considerably. Sorry about that. I'm from Oklahoma by the way. We say ya'll down here a lot. I don't know what else to say.

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