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Review:Chad McDonald says:
I believe this guy must have a few friends bigging up his writing, because I can’t believe any one that has reviewed the work can’t see any faults in what’s has been written. It is a little sad, that he can’t stand on his own two feet and receive some serious criticism.

Author's Response: Fair enough-it's probably because they hadn't read the un-beta'd chapter 1 as it hadn't been validated at the time. If you're interested, that chapter has now been edited and all the incorrect/uncannon parts have been taken out. e.g. effects of expelliarmus, merlins daughter etc

I'm happy to recieve criticism-it really helps me improve my work. It would have been a bit more usefull if you could have pointed out the falts-but then I guess that you're not here to do that-you're here to enjoy yourself, as it should be.

Thanks anyway-I appreciate all reviews

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