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Review:Labby says:
Hmm... okay, so I thought the ending was incredibly cute! Yay, for Hermione and Ron!

I'm not sure I liked the beginning though. It just seemed OOC for Ron to be so depressed over Harry. Sure, at times he was unhappy about being below Harry, but I don't think he would ever become depressed about it like that. Even if he did, I don't think he'd admit it to Hermione. So anyways, if you could think of a different problem that Hermione could sort out, I think that would work out much better.

There were some spelling and grammar issues. You should probably read over it again and you'd be able to catch most of them. Some of your sentences didn't work out completely, and they didn't flow too well. You might also want to add a little more description in.

Besides that it was pretty good! Great job!

Author's Response: Hm yes incredibly cute it was. Ron being depressed over Harry is something that's happened before. Remeber in the Goblet of Fire they stopped being friends for awhile because of it so I don't think that anything is wrong there. Spelling and grammar is not my best stuff I admit. I'm just putting all my stories on here and then getting a beta and doing them all at the same time. I'll rewrite some or most of my stories when I don't have more chapters to post up here for awhile. thank you for the lovely review =]

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