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Review:LisaMacKay says:
Oh wow. *stares* Charz, that was amazing! The way you captured the last scene and everything, every emotion, that was fantastic! And I loved the "oh god" sentence in the very end. It's my favorite one in the whole chapter, because it makes perfect sense even though it technically doesn't. Molly was horribly sad to read and it's sad to hear that Ginny is enstranged from her family, taken away from them because she cannot let go. And you included Charlie! Charlie is my absolutely favorite character of all times and since JK left him practically out of book 7 so shamefully I love everyone how includes him in their stories! (even if it's just a tiny mention). Daniel is hillarious, and I think that Dean is quite a bit jealous of Draco, I bet he would like to dance with Ginny himself. ;) Well the last couple of paragraphs were definitely 15/10, if not 16 (if I could), and the rest was a solid 10/10 as well, so, I'll go with what I have. 10/10 and my lifelong admiration for the wonderful, fantastic "oh god" sentence!!

xo Flissy (who wishes she had her msn awe-ing smiley to use to describe her feelings for this chapter!)

Author's Response: :D I'm gad you liked it! That was my favourite line too actually, when I wrote it. So everything was implied but it was focused more on the feelings and emotions running through Ginny.

I'm also happy you found the Molly scene sad :p . I wasn't sure how that one came out. And lol on the Charlie thing! I'm glad I didn't kill him off now actually :p .

Ah, well we'll see how the Dean thing turns out. I really need to get another chapter up! Or, you know, written :p . Thanks for another great review! :)

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