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Review:LisaMacKay says:
Well I finally found the time and muse to read your story. I think there just are stories that you need a proper setting and internal mood for to be able to properly appreciate them. Well, this chapter was truely short, but as we all know it's not about quantity, but quality, And the chapter definitely was filled with a whole lot of that (quality I mean ^^). Pansy is delicious and your dialogue is absolutely -and I'm sorry but there is no other word for this- superbe, I love it, it makes me read it out loud. I even found myself doing whatever you had your characters do. Facially I mean. Fortunately my back is turned to my roommate because otherwise she would think I've gone mental. ;) Ginny is wonderfully twisted and Draco is great! Oh, and one more thing (I even copied it from up there so I could paste it here): "mollified"! How awesome!! It's my new word of the week! I have yet to find out what exactly it means but it made me think of Pansy wearing Molly's clothes and grinning like a happy mother.

Well, I really enjoyed this but I will have to put off reading chapter 3 until it's not quite so late, as I have school early tomorrow!

xo Flissy

Author's Response: Wow, I don't think anyone's ever got so into a story of mine! lol Though I have to say imagining you doing the expressions is kinda entertaining :p . It was short I know, but the next one is longer and overall keeps the average up I think. Dialogue has always been very important to my stories, I had to improve my narrative a lot and it still needs some work. I'm happy you're enjoying it so much :D . Mollified is a good word! But nothing to do with Molly, lol! It means, erm, placated, appeased. Like say someone is upset with their friend and their friend says something or does something in an effort to mollify or soothe them :) . Thanks for the great review though! :)

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