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Review:Andromedatonks says:
Hey - this is andromeda from the forums :)

I think your characterization was perfect. The situation between Severus and Lily is quite tricky, and I'm glad you didn't overdo it by making them shout at each other or something like that like so many other authors do.

This phrase 'I don't want to remember you anymore." is so Lily. And the way that Severus simply stood there, holding the necklace and remembering all that had happened between them - it is also absolutely in character.

I love the way you made the necklace the center of your story. I'm not usually a fan of such kind of stuff, but you pulled it off very well, and I really enjoyed it. The necklace was like an original character, and a well-written one at that! :)

Author's Response: Hi there!
Thank you so much for this wonderful review! I'm thrilled to know you say I got my characterization was perfect.
I didn't want to over do it...I hate that in stories...I don't think it would have been like that...

Thanks so much. This was actually originally supposed to be a 500+ word description, but as you can see, I kind of got a little carried away...

I'm so glad you liked it =)

Thanks for reviewing!

xx Lily

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