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Review:taylorj828 says:
Hey Sez. *grins* Look, I even spelled it right, haha!

I did what you told me not to do, and found some of your stories. I actually looked through them all and ended up picking a couple that looked most intriguing to me. You have SO many! I hope to be back some day for some more. (o:

So I love the way you jump right into Draco's thoughts without any build up. I don't like a lot of introduction and preliminaries. I love that we go immediately into his head and his thoughts about Ginny's eyes. Lovely, really.

I also like the continued references to her eyes throughout the story. It's a wonderful theme to keep returning too. Some people would write of it in the beginning and let it be, but I like that you keep revisiting it, and reminding us how much those eyes mean to Draco.

No, she was too busy living to notice him over here in his squalid imitation of a life. I like this line. It very succintly shows us both Ginny and Draco, at least from his eyes.

Malfoy shrugs, haha. That's funny. He never shrugs but here he has. Great detail.

Oh Draco... I'm glad he did something good in the end. What a smitten bloke!! I feel a bit bad for him, even though he is a git. But he wanted her so badly. Wish he could have just told her... Now he's gone. Well.. guess that's life.. And death.

It was a nice piece dear, and I think you write quite well. (o:

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