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Review:edenvirg says:
Hi there! :) Overall, I thought this one-shot was a very emotional but beautifully-written story. The memories or thoughts of the future that you've chosen for Ginny to reflect on were good in that it made the whole act of remembering more poignant. For the graves, though, I don't know. The thought that each one didn't deserve to die was kind of repetitive; maybe it would have more impact if you had thought of something unique for each one? Hehe. ;) Also, I found the introduction of Draco into the story to be quite abrupt, as well as Ginny's mood change after he talked to her. Maybe the transition could be made more smoothly by adding a paragraph of how Draco was in those fifteen years after the War anyway? And why was he by Harry's grave...? Those little details could be ironed out to give the one-shot a more realistic touch. :)

Author's Response: First off I would like to say I'm glad that you liked it. There is much to do in so little time and I'm working on a novel on another account(SYN) that explains everything even though it will be forever till we actually finish the story. All the details will be ironed out in that story I promise. =]

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