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Review:Something Wicked says:
I loved this. You are an extremely talented writer and your characterisation is perfect. I particularly like your James...James is one of those characters I'm almost afraid to touch when I write in case I don't do him justice so I admire anyone who can write him as convincingly as you do.

I like how, despite the fact that we haven't seen much of him in canon except as an arrogant fifteen year-old, you've made open up to Sirius here, made him be nervous and confused and...young. Because he was. He was just a kid playing at an adult game really.

The dialogue between the two is very well-done, incredibly realistic.

And the first line is so simple, yet so powerful, there's something poetic about it. "The bride was laughing"

And the ending is beautiful, the way the memory sort of just slips away, entwining briefly with reality.

Thanks for the great read.

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