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Review:dracolover4ever says:
Well this seems like it is going to be a good story. I like that you have James and Lily being friends before school.

Just so you know, there are huge spaces inbetween paragraphs. That makes it a bit harder to read.

I love Lily's reaction to the letter. It really seems realistic. I think that would be how a younger child would react. Good Job!

9/10

Author's Response: Thankyou for the review! I can't figure out how to get rid of the giant spaces between paragraphs unfortunately, so my readers will have to cope. I try and make my characters realistic, because everyone is shades of grey, no on e can ever be perfect, because their lack of imperections would be a flaw. That said, interesting characters are redeemable characters, ones who you can't predict. And reedeemable characters need a motive. Everyone needs a motive, being popular, world domination, everyone needs a motive.

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