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Review:edenvirg says:
Wow, it was brilliant of you to bring Andromeda and Ted into the picture. I really like the way you dealt with canon and your style of writing. You asked for constructive criticism, so here it is. The only thing I think you should do is ask for a good beta (use one from PI since they are accredited) to look over this. Betas spot your errors in grammar and punctuation and tell you the rules so that in time, you learn to write perfect English (or close to perfect). :)

Well, good luck with this story! :)

Author's Response: At the time I wrote this I wasn't even sure whether the Tonks were alive or dead in canon, but I thought Draco was running out of options fast and this could be one route for him. Obviously Ted is not too happy. Thanks ever so much for reviewing the whole story, you're actually the first person to review the lot, which is wonderful because normally I get reviews for the first few chapters and my later ones were feeling a bit lonely, lol I'm currently in the middle of writing chapter 15 but I have a few bits and bobs which belong towards the end which I wrote before DH. I will definitely edit this with a beta, I know the story desperately needs it!

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