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Review:Zacharias_Smith says:
Wow this was such a great chapter. The last paragraphs were so powerfully charged with emotion and so well written. I felt totally convinced by Ginny's allowing herself to be with Draco then and I think the story's paced very well for a short story. At one point near the end you said 'hand hands', that was the only real mistake I noticed, apart from a couple of slightly awkward sentences at the start of the chapter. But this is written extremely well and puhlease update soon!!

Author's Response: :D I'm glad you enjoyed it, especially the last bit as I was quite anxious about it. It's extremely good to hear you were convinced by her letting it all happen as I was thinking it became a little convenient but could think of no alternative. I'll correct that mistakes, thanks for spotting it, I know there were quite a few in this chapter *rolls eyes*. Thanks for reviewing! :)

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