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Review:Ydnas Odell says:
I think a bit abrupt, maybe you should have dragged out the tension for another chapter or two, but I do like this a lot, especially the powerful emotions of the last paragraph. I love Deans concern for Ginny he is her ex-boyfriend and all and actually in this fic, he would be much better for Ginny then Draco, but we don't always do what is best for us. An awesome fic.

Author's Response: I know, I was worried about the abruptness of it all, but it was only ever going to be a short story and so things had to happen fast. If this was a full length story I would definitely not have had them sleeping together by the 3rd chapter. It's good to know you still liked it though as I was pretty anxious about this chapter. How very true about not doing what's best for us, good observation. Glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for the great review! :)

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