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Review:Utopia says:
Why did they let him leave St. Mungos without healing him? You need to add more information into that.

The homophones are back:

hear = in reference to hearing/listening
here = location

your = possession/ownership
you're = you are

Why take a pregnant woman to Azkaban, surely the possibility of someone escaping would be enough of an offput to Draco! And why stress his wife so much by taking her to see Lucius? Causing her to panic like that isn't very clever.
Draco, despite his siding with the Order, still respected his father. He would not hear of having a child without first telling Lucius of the heir to the Malfoy fortune. This doesn't justify putting his wife and unborn child under the possibility of so much danger and in so much stress; you need a better reason than this!

Oh, and Azkaban has a Z in it.

You need more plot bckground, more explination more information!

Author's Response: they didn't heal him completely but there was nothing more they could do!

thanks for the homophones, hopefully i got them all! ;p

ok i've changed that slightly, he took her too Azkaban because he wanted lucius to know he was going to be a father.

thanks for the review!


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