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Review:Utopia says:
My first comment refers to the title of your previous chapter. Day's does NOT need an apostrophe - it is not the owner of anything in this context. it should say DAYS.

I wasn't aware you could apperate to Azkaban - was that rule lifted when the dementors fled? (more background needed).

The prisoners have wands? Surely that is utter suicide for the guards! (more background needed here! How has Lucius come across his wand and the information about Draco, I can't imagine them having a convrersation).

You need to think this through more and add more background; the plot is starting to slip as little details go by unexplained.

Author's Response: no the prisioners don't have wands! that would be suicide! Lucius stole Draco's wand!...i guess i didn't explain that well.

I've fixed it up and added the reason for how they got out of the cells and the reason for the apparations.

thanks for the review, they have all been really helpful!


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