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Review:Ydnas Odell says:
Very good although the exposition is a bit heavy in places. But I don't see a way to avoid it and this way you won't have to repeat it in latter chapters. I think that in addition to the very interesting cultural stuff we are going to see that this should develope into an interesting 'outsiders point of view' of the war.

DH actually gives you some interesting material especially near the end with what we know may have happened to Lavender.

I want to see what you do with this dance magic. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for another great review! I know what you mean about the exposition... I'm not entirely happy with this chapter and may revise it if I see a better opportunity to reveal some of these details in later chapters. That's the problem with writing one chapter at a time with months in between, I guess... but anyway you're right that I do hope to give an interesting POV on some of the events in DH, although the story will really be focused on what's going on in India, at least for a while. But the actual dance magic isn't coming until much later, sorry. Thanks again for reviewing!

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