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Review:the_artful_dodger says:
I've had your story on my favorites for a week or two but I thought I'd drop you a review because I know how frustrating it can be when your fanfic isn't getting any sort of feedback.

I really, really love this general plot (where Snape has a son). It's been an absolute favorite of mine since I got into fanfiction 3 years ago. Unfortunately, it's not too common so I was thrilled to see this fic; especially since it's so well written! You described Benjamin's feelings very well... I always find it difficult to write eleven year olds because they always end up seeming older, but you really seemed to *get* it, if you know what I mean...

Anyway, I'm very anxious to read the next chapter; please update soon! 10/10

P.S. I think it would be better if you didn't have the prequel in two places... because it works so well as a one shot I think you'd be better off taking it out of the beginning of this story. But that's just my opinion :D

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I would delete the prequill, and I did think about that, but I would loose the reviews for it if I did! Thanks again so much!


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