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Review:GinnyWeasleyPotter says:
Woah -- back to England, disguised as Muggles? Would that be very safe? I'm not sure I agree with David's idea there, lol. Poor Heidi, scared for her baby...I can totally understand. I really do like your writing style, so far, the story's a good read and I've enjoyed every chapter. I do think that it would be nice if your chapters were a tad bit longer. I would say that more detail was needed but there's actually a good amount of it in your story -- but still, try your best to push yourself and write even longer chapters :)
“Heidi, I don’t know what’s right to do and I don’t know what’s wrong to do. It feels like a guessing game,” he said, squeezing Heidi’s hands tighter yet. This is my favorite quote in this chapter. A guessing game...I like how he phrased that (or basically you wrote that :P).
And aww, a cliffie! I want to find out what David has in mind! So keep up the good work and update soon,
xo Lauren

Author's Response:
Haha, I had to give him a little spontaniety. =) Spice it up a little. lol. The next update should come soon. =)

-CArrie


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