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Review:GinnyWeasleyPotter says:
UGH! I always forget to favorite stories when they're written for a challenge I issued and then I haven't been on the forums in a while and just...ugh. I apologize for not reviewing earlier :]
I really like how we were able to know more about Heidi in this chapter, you gave more information about her. The ending, about when they were talking about who was on the list -- for some reason that confused me, about who was talking. I mean, I know that Heidi is the one who's Muggle-born but the way you wrote it was confusing, so I thought David was the one talking about being on the list for a moment.
I love David and Heidi's relationship, the two are so sweet to each other, it made me smile :)
“I thought that maybe, just maybe, the Wizarding World would be happier place than my home. Every little girl thinks that magic is equal to a fairy tale. I was very wrong.” That has to be my favorite quote from this chapter, it was a great line.
So on to chapter three, good job!!
xo Lauren

Author's Response:
Aww, that's okay. I don't mind. Better late than never.
Sorry that I confused you! That was definitely unintentional. I'll revise that.
I wanted to create a safe sanctuary kind of dynamic for their relationship. Like, no matter what happened, Heidi would be there for David and vice versa, so it's good to hear that you think they're sweet to each other. That's definitely the point. =)
I quite liked that line myself. ;)

-Carrie

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