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Review:odd_profession says:
“Shush! I don’t want to here your incompetent voice when I don’t have to.” Sirius made an angry pout and kept walking. They were going through the many halls of the castle to get to their destination. With his arms crossed, he looked like a little boy out shopping in the market with his shorter, and evidently younger, mom.

see the mistake? “Shush! I don’t want to here your incompetent voice" should be hear she's supposed to be smart so you should change that. great chapter
I will play black jack with you know that I understand it.
also it seems out of character for Sirius to say "Oh my gosh! " at the end~
cant wait to see where you take this~

Author's Response: thanks for pointing that out to me. i could use all the help i can get!

oh, and i can't wait to win alot of money from you in the game of black jack. MUHAHA!

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