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Review:Gringot_Gremlin says:
Hey, I read your first story a long time ago and absolutely loved it! I had no Idea you had made a sequel! This is absolutely fantastic by the way, one of my favorite stories on here.

Firstly, you don't fall into the trap of making Harry some kind of superhero, who can shoot lightning bolts from his eyeballs and breathe fire or anything like that. You make him into a normal kid who is trying to overcome a handicap - and succeeding.

Secondly, I love the role you have given to the remaining Dursleys. I've always wondered what Harry would be like if he was given a loving upbringing, and what it would be like if he and Dudley were friends.

Thirdly is the whole Neville/Dumbledore thing. Dumbledore is set up as flawed character - by no means the god like figure Rowling shows (Well, until Deathly Hallows anyway). And turning Neville into Harry and vice versa - like the petrifying spell from the first story. Great idea!

This is going on too long, and I haven't even mentioned Draco, Hedwig, the Founders, Snape/Petunia, Ginny/Neville, Quidditch, Harry openly hating Lockhart, training in the room of requirement, Healing, or Merlin House. But just so you know, I love the lot of it!

That all being said (clears throat). Please please for the love of God post again soon!

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