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Review:delta says:
I just knew that was going to happen (even if I didn't want it to).

I'm a little curious about what Regulus would have said to explain his situation to her considering there's not much he can explain away (at least I think so). I'm seeing some parallels here between Alycone and Regulus and Lily and Severus in DH. Regulus and Severus both lose the girl they care about because of their interest in the Dark Arts, turn good, and die (haha, that sounded morbid). I'm guessing Alycone's going to be paying Sirius more attention now.

I'd also like to point out that I loved how you wrote the chapter, what with the whispers in the beginning and then the way you described it from there. It was an interesting twist on describing sorrow and definitely a more vivid and unique one. Anyways, this was a brilliant chapter. :D I'm really curious as to the possible ramnifications this will have on both Regulus (perhaps, the impetus for doubts about the dark arts) and Alycone.

Author's Response: You're right; there really wasn't much Regulus could have said but he was trying to buy time. I actually had this chapter planned before I read DH, but the parallels definately work out well. Maybe I should throw Severus into the mix...but I always struggle so with writing his character. :( As for Sirius and Alcyone...you'll see in the next chapters. ^_^

Thanks so much for your review delta!


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