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Review:posers_sux says:
Aw, how tragically sad. I liked it... though she didn't mean to do it, she probably help his dying that much easier for him. He wasn't alone, at least. It could have been anyone, really, but it was just nice... in an eerie sense.

But... why, if she had watched Bellatrix curse Ginny, hadn't she cursed Bellatrix before she got Ginny?? I mean... she wasn't too bad off (clearly, as she was walking around and everything), so why didn't Hermione help her friend?

Anyway, that was very interesting. I really did like it. And, I see you've got a bunch of other short stories, so I'm going to have to read a few of those, too :P. Good job!

-Dana

Author's Response: Well yes, I suppose that's true. Although for Draco I'm not sure if he'd prefer to be alone rather than dying beneath the eyes of Hermione Granger herself.

I didn't want that to be the main focus of the story - revenge. I wanted simplicity and description, as well as acceptance of death and just something more . . . powerful than most typical themes of stories. I wanted something different, and I think that if she had gotten revenge on Bellatrix that would have shattered the point and illusion of imagery I was trying to portray in my story.

Thanks once again for your thoughs, Dana.


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