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Review:theotherchick says:
I liked the storyline, I liked the moment set in a familiar time...I don't know. Something seemed off in pacing...trying to be constructive. The rhythm seemed odd. I don't know how to put it.

Author's Response: Thank you, I think... I did write this in a very short period of time, but I was going for a suddenness in the story when Harry tripped as well as a suddenness for him, so I could see how it might feel like an improper lead-in to that part.

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