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Review:taylorj828 says:
*feels so giddy about this chapter* I confess, I read it twice, hehe. (o:

I like in the beginning you mention that Harry's looking out instead of returning Cedric's gaz, as thought implying that either he was purposefully avoiding it or Cedric was specifically noticing the lack of eye contact and perhaps desiring it. (o:

Good point with Harry always saving people. I mean, I get tired sometimes of everyone's mention of the 'saving people thing' because I don't think he can be so easily labelled or quantified, but I like it here because it's a discussion over Harry's purpose, or lack there of, in death. He's spent all his years chasing after this enemy, rescuing people, and now he's probably feeling empty without it. I've always wondered about how Harry would feel after it ended. I imagine him with some dangerous job, auror or whatnot, because after so many years he couldn't leave well enough alone and just sit at hom with Ginny, yano?

Nudge of hands - AH! Yep, I noted it, and I liked it. I love the little things you do that make your reader's stomach flipflop, just like the characters, no doubt.

His impulse to touch Harry! I love the little touches, hands and fingers. It's all so perfect and lovely, so small and yet so big. You write them so well, and I love it! *takes notes*

Mmm, Harry thinking on the afterlife but cedric wanting to know his thoughts on their hands. AMAZING! I love that part so much because it communicates their states of minds so well. I can see it perfectly in my head, Harry turning over the ideas his mind, feeling but not even really aware of the hands and the touches. Cedric dying to know his thoughts, worried as heck, afraid even. That's a great moment!

Eep! Harry glanced away embarrassed! I love it! I love that you can convey thoughts and feelings without telling us. You haven't written out what Harry's thinking but I feel like I can feel it. Noticing his reactions just like Cedric and getting a grin over Harry's sudden eye-averting and embarrassment. Brilliant!

Mm, interesting with the difference between Lily and James and Cedric, and the sock bit. That was really interesting, Harry's thoughts... How Lily and James had moved past this part where Harry is stuck and he can't talk with them about it. I like the trust and dependence that's growing between Cedric and Harry. It's quite nice. (o:

Oi, Harry's wording caught me off guard too! Pleasantly so! I was spazzing out 'cos he actually say that. Like, "What? What, wait... wait a second! What did he just say? Just imply?!! AHH!" Hehe.

harsh bliss - Amazing wording. Amazing. Brilliant

OI!!! E! LoL. Wow, amazing. Holy Moley! The kiss was great and I love Cedric's mention of Harry's passion and the lack of it in death, but how he came alive again with Ced. I love the awkwardness, yep, always! And the conversation by the door, when Cedric interprets the real meaning of Harry asking if he can come by later. And the last line of that section - how to act in front of Lily when her son turned his brain to mush... That was all so perfect and beautiful!! Made my heart all fluttery and happy! Wow awesome! I can't go on enough about how much I liked that scene! The touches, brush of hair, hand on the waist, gazes, and kissing and passion... Ha! Brilliant!

Aw man, more, more, come on!!! (o: I love how you write Cedric and Harry!! Hehe.

Author's Response: I get tired of the saving people thing too. It IS an important part of his character, but it does get overdone. I'm glad you thought this was a little different - I tried not to make it too cliché.

Eee hee, I like the bit with Harry being all thoughtful while Cedric's thinking about their hands too. For some reason I always torture Cedric a bit in my H/C stuff... Not on purpose, I swear. =/

Hahah "the sock bit." For a second I was like, whaaaat is she talking about? But yes, I remember now. I'm glad you liked it. =)

I know, I almost didn't dare make Harry say that... But then I was like, they're gonna kiss in a second, might as well! =D Hahaha, I'm glad you liked it. There will be more soon, my dear. I'm sooo so excited to see what you think of the coming scenes... *squees* Thanks for everything.

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