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Review:comeon359 says:
a bit starange i sugest that you make a story on what happened. you give the ending in this so say how it started and things like that

Author's Response: well thank you for reviewing coneon359. what i'm going for here is to focus on the end. the song is about ending a relationship and the pain involved, so i purposely began at the end so to speak.

i hope the reader will gather through the descriptions that they were in a deep and meaningful relationship. it ended because of hardships that i eluded to in the words which i interwove with certain lines from the lyrics.

its only part of thier story really, a glimpse or a snap shot. i wanted things to be a little ambiguous. i want the reader to consider: why did they break up? what happens? do they kill themselves?, does draco get the courage to stand by her?

i do agree with you that it would make for a good story from start to finish though- thanks for your comments.

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