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Review:spicyhc123 says:
Very cute! I loved the diary entries, they showed Jane's personality well. I like how you took a different approach to this story. You show what Jane's writing, along with what's also going on around school. I felt that you did well keeping the characters in character. I thought it was really good.

I saw a few things however.

1. You spelled damit, then you used Damnit. You kept on switching.

2.today being the statue of the one-eyed witch!] I'm thinking you meant behind?

3. Instead of using ', use " for dialogue. UNLESS you were taught to use ', then use that =]

I liked it a lot! keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I'm not quite sure why I do it, but I do have a tendancy to switch between 'damit' and 'damnit'. It doesn't make sense! Thanks for pointing out the few things you did. I really like it when a reviewer can help me improve the story. And I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I was pretty happy with Jane as a character; she's just a tad challenging to write, is all. :)

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